How much of summer do you like? What’s your favorite season? My favorite season is summer. You can probably guess why! I love summer because the weather is nice, there is more to do, and there is no school!! I wish it was longer than the bleak original 3 months of summer we have. I still appreciate it greatly that we actually have a summer break. I think everyone’s favorite season is summer because most students don’t like school and they have a break. I like it because no school and the weather is awesome!
My list of seasons on how I would rate them goes: summer, spring, autumn, and then the dreadful winter. I hate winter because its colt and the loss of some daylight hours. Most students would most likely put the seasons in that order as well as I did.
Summer is definitely better than the other seasons! Summer is most people’s free-time to do whatever, only if they have the freedom and not locked up or not having to do work crew. I like to go visit my aunt and uncle during my summer break. Sometimes I wish it was summer all year round!!!
9 comments:
Cory dude you did a really good job i can here your voice when i read this.the only thing is you have one spelling err. but who cares cuz i don't. i agree that summer is the best season because i hate the cold but i do love to snowboard.
Cory, I really like your writing its organized you know what your talking about but at the same time with the whole most students, you should really try too ask kids an see how they feel about the seasons an collect data but other that that your fluency is great an you did a great job.
I feel you but if you look at the big picture over summer brake thats when people usualy get in truble but still you gotta love the summer time. you need to be more organized and give more details.
i think that it was good buut you could have used more detals in it.
Cory it wuss good but you cued ad periods more on it.Other then that it wuss good. good job.
I would just like to make a case for Winter because that is my favorite season. In the winter, the air is crisp and clean. You can go home and snuggle in a blanket with a nice hot cup of hot chocolate. Also, it is weird, but in the winter my hair grows faster, my skin is better, I sleep better, and I just feel better. I am definitely a happier person in the winter. The summers are just too hot for me. I am so uncomfortable in the heat and that makes me cranky.
I a agree with you. i like summer as well. its just the time of the year that most people love
I like your voice in this. You have some mispelled words though. I like winter instead of summer.
Your writing is very organized. It's easier to read when its that way. But i so agree with you. Summer is the best season of them all. The worm sun on your skin is the best. And i also agree with you about winter. The snow kills it. I hate the snow. And you should put a little more excitement into your writing.
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