Unforgettable love is something that is a very deep in your heart. When you have someone that you would do anything for you wouldn’t care what happening around you. You would just focus on her
Because in your heart you know you have deep feelings for. Great poet by the name of Brian McKnight he said one of the greatest sayings about love. When I feel your heart beat my love gets stronger every moment when am without you even when I was a depressed I felt your cry for love my life wouldn’t have gone on without your since of beauty if I had one last dream my wish would be you and I on that summer blue even when we first met .what would people do with the feeling of unforgettable love, there is a point in all the stuff am saying unforgettably love is a love that is stronger then anything you can imagine when you have this feeling in your heart that’s very deep for someone you cant stop thinking about it it’s a action that is in your heart, people don’t understand the reason why unforgettable love is all daily life stuff .my example of unforgettable love is when you meet someone that you first met on a date and you have a feeling in your heart he or she is the one for you but you just don’t know but later couple more dates you realize that you may have fallen in love with this person that is a example of unforgettable love ,the book that we are reading Wright
Now is bout a lady that falls in love with a young man and they go out and talk to each other for a couple of weeks and after a couple of date they had fallen in love and my example of that is unforgettable love it’s a very power full things.
8 comments:
I believe that this kinds of love doesn't happen to everyone. Most people have the kind of love that makes you feel good and warm, but it isn't all consuming as this sounds.
On the second line yu put what happening around you,it should be what's happening around you.
I like how you talked about love it is worded very nicely and explained good.
you did great but you could make it a little longer and work on voice. you did a great job in sentence fluency. I agreed on your opinion of why you think people are scared of the dark.
not all people can fall in love like this. i think its really good. but sometime you can think its love but its not really. its just something that tells you that you love them. but really your just in love with the fact of having someone there for you.
Nice job, i think your missing some words.Love forever is also for family too not just for a her. so what I'm trying to say is on one of your sen tens intend of putting she you could put person.
I agree with unconditional love because i know that it is out there. I personally have unconditional love for my girlfriend and my family. I would do anything for my family.I would take a bullet and die for the ones that I love unconditionally
This doesn't really happened to everyone. But you know what my love for Miguel is unforgettable love i will never forget our love i will always love him no matter what happens even through hard times we past. I know how u feel i would take a bullet for him. He is my everything. But yeah not everyone in the world will always have unforgettable love, you did good.
great poem jordan you are my homie and no one can change that and if anyone messes with you i got your back and i am a great fighter
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