What does being alive mean to you? To me it is being able to feel. Letting yourself realize your feelings and letting yourself feel them. Being alive is acting like tomorrow is your last day and remembering everything you do is part of your life even if it’s good or bad. Everything you do or happens to you happens for a reason and it becomes part of your life.
The last time I felt alive. Was when my Aunt was really sick with caner. And when I went to see her in the hospital I felt dead I felt but I didn’t want to. So I blocked it out and acted like I didn’t care. And even after I left I still felt dead. Then after a couple of weeks she went to a doctor again my mom and I went to see what they were going to say. And as we were waiting for the doctor my aunt sat there looking so scared a little. And that’s when I realized how much being alive is important. But when the doctor come in he told us her caner was retreating it was the most wonderful thing. It made me realize that I never took my life seriously until I realized that you could die any day.
21 comments:
I ca relate too your story, i honestly ca an i can feel where your coming from. i really like your fluency an the way you worded it. you don't really need too improve on anything. great j0b
you need to work on spelling and don't start a sentence with and.
you did great about telling your experience. I'm sorry your aunt had Cancer? is it cancer? i don't know what caner means.
i think that you use really good voice i can here the emotion as i read this passage. i dont really think that you need to improve on anything so keep up the good work. i can really relate to the feeling alive and when others are facing death you absorb their emotions
I think your blog is awesome. To me it has meaning, like live your life it is short live it wisely and smart spend it with the people you care about.
i like the way you detailed your ideas. i also agree on your summer favorate nice weather to.
i also liked the way YOU did your ideas and the way you put your words. i have fears of some things to but i dont worry about them.
i liked your feel alive thing its every where you feel it. i feel it places to its kind of cool i guess.
I liked the way it all flowed together. It really made a lot of sense.
I can relate my grandpa has cancer and he wont make it longer but the way you have the right flow and good fluency in you writing you don't need to change anything
Isn't it crazy how it isn't until we are close to death that we realize how alive we really are. It seems cruel that we have to experience that in order to truly appreciate the life we have been given.
I don't think you have anything to work on i really liked the way you did your blog. I think the way you explained yourself and all the detail you put in it is great. I can relate cause when i lost my daughter I tried to hide what i was feeling and I made it seem like I didn't care.
I REALLY LIKED YOUR STORY. yea life is very impotent so we must live it to the fullest, but that don't mean go crazy. you should add more details about how you feel. Because you kind of repeated your self about how you feel.
you did really good but your spelling and punctuation should be a lot more better you have a lot of talent use it you did great keep up what you are doing
i am way sorry that you went through that i kind of went through the same thing with my mom but i totally agree with you i feel the same way i didn't see any error your blog great job
I agree with you. i am sorry for what you went through
Thats ture you can feel dead when your so far from it.Sad things happen and some time you cant get over them but you can always try and look at the good things in life. You did good. why didnt you tell me.
i think you need to work on spelling and word choice. you story was great after all. i like to live so it was intresting to read this
I so agree with you. Sometimes it takes something so drastic to make us realize how important are life is. But i also think that people don't realize that we could die tomorrow and that's why we wanna have fun and do crazy things and they hold us back and then when are time does come it doesn't feel like the full life you wanted it to be.
Other than a couple grammer errors it was really good. You did good job getting your point across. :]
I always say live your life like todays your last.
never take life seriously nobody gets out alive anyways.haha just playing you know what i mean tho think about it.
you made it sound like you were telling the story.
you should of reread over it twice because you missed spelled a couple words.
iv had some thing the same happen to me like that but my bothers are in wheelchairs and they cant walk any more.when me and my mom took them to the doctors the doctors said they don't have to long to live.
i think this is very touching i saw my friend die and i felt like i was dieing so this is true
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