Dear Everyone.
How are things going down there with the family? How is everyone? Everyone missing me because I know I miss them a whole lot! Things down here in the states our pretty boring and really unsafe, for example they don’t have fire escapes in downtown because of the rich people.
They think the escapes are ugly so just because they are ugly they don’t want them I mean, where does safety come in? Oh well, I’m just waiting till the day there is a fire and a whole lot of rich people get caught up and then we’ll see where the fire escapes are at other than that things down here are kind a rough it’s hard too get a job and if you do get one it won’t pay that much so it’s a baffle but I’m doing my best with what I have now so I can send the family money.
Everyone down here is treating me well, there is a lot and I mean a lot of people down here. Whenever I go too the park I see all these families together having a good time laughing, eating, just really having fun and those moments I miss the most like just being with the family with no worries or problems.
Soon enough I will have enough money too bring all of you guys down here and we can all be a family again and have all the great moments we have. It will be all us together and we’ll be reunited. Oh and one more thing they have the biggest buildings ever, they are so high in the sky it’s amazing.
Well I’m going off too work now ☺
Take care I love you guys
Sincerely; Jose Your favorite.
3 comments:
You could work on conventions because in places you used periods you could have used comma's. you did a great job in your ideas and how you expressed them. i like how you ask them questions.
wow really really good i loved it personally i didn't think there was anything wrong with it but i guess i have to give you some constructive criticism um...you should have been more positive idk sorry i really did love it
I LOVE IT! it was funny and to true. HA HA HA!
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