In the beginning of time there was a God named Sarah she created the earth. It began in darkness, created out of the darkness was blizzard goddess of winter, created in the ocean was Kailani goddess of the ocean and garlands. Sarah then created star from the night sky god of the night. Born out of the flower was summer goddess of the sun and summer. Created by the trees was the god jasper he ruled over the forest. Pompy was created by the mountains. Doe was created by the deer he ruled over the animals. And the god of the all gods was named meteor.
All gods were mentioned by name.each of the gods created The gods were the mirror image of man.
7 comments:
I like how you gave names to all the different things of life. I also like how the names meant things like doe, which is a female deer. I also like your unique idea of how the earth began, starting with a blizzard, and creating everything else that is in existence. Good job.
This is really short but good at the same time there isn't much of explaining about anything besides for the gods. Atleast you did it right?
Hey this is pretty short, it could be longer and have more detail about the gods, and how the earth was created but other than that this is a good paper. Keep it up :)
Wow, I really like it.i like how you said that all of the gods names were mentioned at the end of your myth. I also like how you said that the earth was created from a blizzard and it makes it that much more interesting.but overall I think you did a great job so keep it up.
i like the names. very good story. you should be an author..
Your story was short but descriptive and it caught my attention very fast. Really good.
It's short but good. You could have done better though, you have a lot more potential than this.
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