In the beginning, before time and space, there was darkness and chaos. Out of the darkness a dark being was formed. In the universe there is an opposite of all things. So a being of light was also formed. That was the first time light had entered that part of the universe. The great beings hated each other. They had many epic battles. In their fighting they unknowingly created matter. Light figured out how to use this matter and tricked Dark into a prison, no prison is perfect so Dark was able to leak out. Now Light was all powerful, he barely had to fight Dark. Wherever Light was Dark would flee in fear, and cower in his presence.
Without Dark to battle Light was very bored. He decided to create things with the matter, just like the prison he built. First he created Mrs. Light, so he could have a companion. They started to create together. They made wonderful planets from the matter. They also had beautiful children, they called them Stars. The stars had a lesser light than there parents, but Dark would still flee, and cower away from them. Mr. and Mrs. Light got tired of there tacky names, so they changed it to GOD and GODDESS. They kept on creating from the matter. They accidentally created earth. They went to investigate what they had just created. When their radiance touched the earth, strange things began to happen. So they decided to stay and see what was else the earth might do. They found water on the earth. Things began to live and crawl. GOD was intrigued by this strange planet, but GODDESS thought it was boring, so she left and went lived with her other children.
GOD found that these creatures were made from matter. He started to make thing that resemble them. His first attempt was a failure. The creatures he made were hideous, so he sent a big wave of water to destroy them. He experimented for a long time. He saw a strange looking animal (the chimp) so he decided to create something similar. He named them Humans. GOD was a curious being. He just sat back and watched them live. But they were missing something. He thought about it for a long time, and then he realized that they were stupid and thought less, so he gave them intelligence. He gave them fire. He let them figure out the other essentials of life. GOD started to feel empty inside, in truth he missed GODDESS. But he loved his Humans also. Instead of just leaving them and letting Dark destroy them, he created his son to protect them. He named the son, SUN. He asked SUN to watch over his beloved Humans. SUN agreed wholeheartedly. So GOD left and lived with GODDESS. The Humans are still alive today, waiting for GOD to return.
4 comments:
I really liked your creation myth. I thought it was very creative, and it covered all the points you were supposed to meet. I like how God created man out of the image of chimpanzee's because in all reality we are very similar with them. I also like how humans were stupid at first but then were given intelligence. It was a good idea and fun to read. Good job man.
I like this, it kind of sounds like the story of god in the bible, but with a little twist I like this better. Its clever how he saw the little chimp and made humans from that, it's pretty cool how you made this sound scientific, mythological and religious good job!
Preston,
I liked your story. It pulled me in. It reminds me of a story similar to something my great grandmother used to tell my before she passed. You can tell you worked hard on it and tried.
Your story is pretty sick, it is really good and I liked it alot, its kinda like mine, Good Job!
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