The wave’s crash
The air quickens
The heart beat speeds
The heat exceeds
The time is endless
The mad rush of joy
Your shinning smile
Melts my heart in the fire of your love
The fire of our love
The fire of our fate
You send me on this endless ride of happiness
I think of my past
Thinking this will end badly
When can I get off this ride?
I think I’m going to be sick
Then you stop me
Kiss me like it would be our last
My desire for your love is on fire
I’m struck so please take me higher!
4 comments:
I like your poem, because it's true and you dont know what to expect next I mean what if it really is the last kiss and you don't know. I like the words you used, because it made a lot more interesting.
this one is great it sounds like your on a ride speeding up faster an faster. its pretty good how you write about love in a powerful way. my favorite line is (Your shinning smile melts my heart in the fire of your love) I think its great.
this was so good Elee. i love that you are talking about love.. because this is exactley what love feels like is a roller coaster ride.. love it!!!!!
wow this is my favorit Elee it is really good wording. I think you are really good at what you wright and it makes me proud.
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