As I lay on a summer night,
I see the stars but feel a fright,
I hear wicked sounds
Throughout the grounds,
I’m so scared, I see no light
I can feel the fright,
The sounds of night are deathly ill
The power of karma has no will,
Until I see what’s in front of me,
I won’t sleep, but continue to weep.
I hate this life,
Struggling to strife,
Ill never see the brighter side of me,
All I see is black and white,
All I hear are the sounds of night.
8 comments:
Now in your life, you need to find that motivation to do something with it. You need to lift up your head and get it our of the clouds. You will find things in it you never knew. (:
♥Elee
i think you did good on words in it i guess
I really like it you made alot of good points in it. And you related it to your life which is cool cause its hard to do that. You are as bright as a star though we all go through our struggles in life but it made you who you are today, and that is a shinnig star.
good job i relly like it made aloy of good points on it
These poem reminds me of laying a wake at night when things have went bad that day.i think you did good on. but it kinda sounds a little bit emo.
I think this is has a lot of meaning in it, some times. I feel like that to but motivation is the key in life. good job man.
I think this is a good poem because i no how you feel and live sucks most of the time soo good job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I feel thaty this poem does explaine allot of what you feel and I can respect that. You add that you can feel the fright just ask your self what that means and next time try and explaine it more.
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