When evils good, the good goes bad
Just a little boy asking for a second chance
One imperfect decision left him stuck
His future loomed to show no love
This life is rare and up to no good
His freedom taken away to make it better understood
He stands on a road with two directions
Little does he know he’s really facing
The biggest dicision of his life
Now it’s ether bow down or fight
But bowing down isn’t him so he’ll stand and fight, for his beliefs
Even if it means laying 6ft. deep
He feeds from his power of will
And is very deadly when he grips the steal
He’s always ready for the good or bad
His life is in his hands
He completely understands
That, the end is near
Still he stands alone with no help or fear.
10 comments:
There are many things you have to stand up for in life. Beliefs is one of them. It's cool that you would stand up for your beliefs and won't back down.
Mr. Bigtime Rapper Over Here. Ha. Good Job. This Is Sick. Keep Standing Up For Your Beliefs And Values And Don't Ever Back Down.
i really like this poem. I think it was really good. you put alot of things about life and how you gonna live it
your poem is a wonderful poem you are a great poet and you are awesome person
I think that this poem is mostly about you because I can see how you react front of people who disrespect you so I really like this poem.
Hey. You're poem was really powerful to me. I can totally relate in a way. I don't know your circumstance, but I understand your emotions expressed in this poem. Great poem it says a lot.
Man this poem is great and has meaning in it. You really show expression in it great job.
hey whats up man i under stand what ur talking about.i know that life is not far or else we both would of never been here butt theres nothing we can do.its up to us what we do with our lifes and its all up to us what we make out of it..
I like this good job. Always stand up for your beliefs never give up. I like it because this poem has a meaning.
You really know how to write Gustavo. This poem sounds a lot like you. I love the way you just speak your mind and you tell people how it is even though sometimes it causes trouble. Good job. Hang in there.
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