She told me there was no poison
Without my angel I would’ve died
She told me to wash the rags in that poison
I yelled and pleaded for anything but that
I was doomed; I chose to live than die.
I won’t be able to ho home now
The king will send me back to hell
There’s no way out of this.
I will be forced to do worse things now
She will laugh at her games she plays.
I can’t even scream, shout, or cry out
There’s no use now
Maybe I should let her poison me
The worst will be over then.
I won’t have to suffer again…
I won’t feel the pain at the end…
6 comments:
Damn! haha this is dope! I liked it a lot actually. I never knew you could write like this I loved it. It was very intersting. It kind of made me feel in the momment. ((:
very well written I like it. I was hoping that I could tie it to my life when I read it. You know I kinda tie it to my life in the way of falling into someone else lies and manipulation.
WTF! This in a weird way makes my day. I know that feeling when you think someones trying to kill you. This is well written. Stay away from the broccoli. :D
♥Elee
When I read this I can't help but think what kind of things have people gone through? Poems have so many symbolic interactions. At least I think so. Anyways I think this is a good poem.
It makes me feel like at some times in our lives it is really hard for you. I've had something like this happen to a good friend of mine.
megan you are a great poet and no one can change that and i will talk to you in 5th period
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