The world spins round
Different colors, sound, and sense of time
DIVERSITY
Love, hate, happy, sad
A smile, a frown
A sweet kiss with tears of joy
Fly or fall, High or low
How does love make you…and your soul?
Flash, spark, there’s fire in the dusk
Firemen lighting that last book
Of love with all their hate
Look at me; do I not look like what you see?
My eyes of green,
Others blue, brown, hazel, or grey
We all see different
What I see in you is the reason why I’m falling for you. _
10 comments:
I agree with you about the feelings that you brought up connected to love. I think that you placed it right on the dot the spark that you feel the fire in the dusk that happens when love strikes at you. This poem was definitely well written and I completely agree.
This poem is pretty cool I like all the rhyming. I like how it is about every body how they can feel so many emotions see so many senses. I also like how u are talking about falling for someone all at the same time.
This poem has alot of meaning. I love poems about love. Sometimes other people dont get why we like or love someone. But they dont see, what we see in them.
you are a great person and a wonderful friend and i can trust you with anything so thanks
Wow that is heck of deep. I really like it. It makes me think of someone, and it sparks a memory in me, thanks for that. Don't know you, but nice job!
Wow this is really deep in depth. you really show character and expressed feelings great job.
Elee, girl you are definately a poet. You word your emotions so smoothly and all your words flow together. I understand where you are coming from though. Everyone has different perspectives and that's what makes this world go 'round.
it has a good meaning and the surface of the poem is really good and the deeper meaning is awesome
This is one of my favorite poems that you have written because you show a lot of passion in your wording.You must really love the person you wrote this too. Ha
you have NO idea<3 (: lol
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