Sometimes Life gets rough,
Tough and you feel crushed.
Keep moving forward,
Improving and progressing.
There’s always someone out there,
Who has it worse than you.
So chill and feel,
Don’t deal and kill.
Is your cup half full?
Or are you being held back?
By your negative thoughts
And unnecessary crap.
Why do you hurt yourself?
Making life worse.
Shift your paradigm,
And change life’s course.
Life’s not as hard
As we make it out to be.
Flip life’s cards and
Happy you will be.
6 comments:
Wow. Dude this is way good. It's so true that others may have it worse than we do. I like how you say
"Is your cup half full?
Or are you being held back?
By your negative thoughts
And unnecessary crap."
Honestly mines seen half full and it's helped me out better in the long run.
♥Elee
there could be a few corrections in my opinion though it means allot to change I agree, and you hit it right on the spot when you were talking about the only one bringing you down is yourself. I can make a few personal links to my life from this poem thank you.
It's a good poem. The meaning is simple, not too deep, and yet you really have to think about it. It makes sense too. People are constantly holding themselves back just because they don't see things in the best light. Believe me, I would know.
Hey I wrote a poem just like this! Good poem..... Wait a minute
I couldn't agree more. All the hip gangster wannabes that go out shooting people need to chill and see that life is more than what it seems to be, and that life is more than a popularity. Keep writing your stuff this a great idea.
This says that there will always be something good for you out there.
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