It’s just one of those days that make, you want to give up
The love from your FAM just isn’t in off
You want to move on all that you want is peace
But there’s something missing something in between
You’re FAM and friends give you they’re full support
But for some reason that don’t matter no more
You want to give up but can’t ask for help
You’re looking in to the eyes of hell
Trying to make a name for yourself
Some how, you end up in all the wrong places
Talking to strangers and unfamiliar faces
Knowing one false move could leave you dead
You walk with regrets but have to pretend
Like your life is ku
Like if you got a lot to gain but nothing to lose
7 comments:
I really like that you wrote about support. I think support from family and friends is very important. Especially when someone is in the same situations that alot of us at Summit have to face.
If that makes any sense? I really like this poem alot. You put alot of thought into it.
I like this poem because I know how it is not being around people that you don't know or don't feel comfortable with.
Wow once again a great poem. I know that sometimes life sucks and all that you want to do is give up, but just know that if you keep going and fighting for your beliefs and standing up for what you believe in it ends up, for the better.I know you don't know me, but I just thought I would comment anyway it was a great poem.
i really like this poem of yours. At first i thought you had some spelling errors but then i realized that is how the poem is suposed to be. I really look forward to seeing more of your work.
Gustavo, wow you write intense words that I can relate to. I feel the exact same way. I feel that my friends and family love me, but it's not always enough. You aren't sure what you are longing for, but you are just unhappy and need something more. You couldn't have said it any better.
Damn Gustavo this poem is really good. I know exactly how you feel when you just wanna give up and say "F it!" Just hang in there things will get better. Keep your head held high.
I can relate to your poem in allot of ways and that I think is awsome.
You aare able to take the bad in your life and relate it to others lives. I can feel you in this poem thank you.
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